Desire de la peau
or
What the skin desires...
On a hot April afternoon
The needs of the body takes over
The heat that leaves me breathless
Urges me to do something desperate
But shall I, will I, can I???
Maybe not
Am afraid of being seen for what I want
After all am “worth a lil more than just what my skin desires”…
Or am I?
Monday, April 03, 2006
Posted by serendipiduous at 7:54 PM
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my,my. verses !wen they are well-written , they are capable of influencing the reader in ineffable ways. still, i shall attempt to describe wat i felt after reading ur lines- i raised my brows involutarily, sat up om my chair and felt a chill sensation on my arms and feet! may be, it happend to some extend because i empathise with u . but its equally true dat ur description of an abstract, perplexing emotion like this one was amazingly graphic!
humm food for thought ding!
what did you do???????
kalmuhi!!!
hmm nice one
amazing way of pouring your desire into words, it reminded me of this song by fiona apple here is a bit from it:
You moved like honey in my dream last night
Yeah, some old fires were burning
You came near to me and you endeared to me
But you couldn't quite discern me
Does that scare you? I'll let you run away
But your heart will not oblige you
You'll remember me like a melody
Yeah, I'll haunt the world inside you
And my big secret - Gonna win you over
Slow like honey, heavy with mood
I'll let you see me, I'll covet your regard
I'll invade your demeanor
And you'll yield to me like a scent in the breeze
And you'll wonder what it is about me
It's my big secret - Keeping you coming
Slow like honey, heavy with mood
les desires de ma peau sont beaucoup et ma valeur est plus que les desires.
c'est pour tout le monde. pour vous aussi.
y am i saying all this? coz i'm actually checking if i can still write french n if yes, are others able to understand. what i actually wanted to say has already been said by UG. ;P
sir,
thanks for commenting on my blog. that was really sweet of u.
SEGUNDA PIEL, second skin was a great spanish film, check that out!
anyway
To the sun over the head out cloud.
let you shine more rays upon me,
what shall i do to make it brittle
caress it with the very gentle.
How will i ever be so kind
to make all these things got desire
to unload my dearest passion
cover me sweet embrace
Tell me that your skin is my skin
tell me that your body is like
a transparent like you..
for a wonderous kind. you are very delight!
wow!
i agree wow!!!
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